Wednesday, July 23, 2014

Cumworthy


So, throughout my writing career I've written both long stories and short stories. My shorter stories (5 pages or less) tend to have one arc, usually one ball busted wide open, and one man ruined (or partially ruined). Things like Jack and Jill series or the Self Defense class series. One man, one ending, one opportunity for the reader to "get off"

My long stories, on the other hand, I structure in such a way as to have many "cumworthy" points. Many ball descructions, many men and many points where things climax. My favorite example of this is my Jill series, especially Jill's Summer Continues. There are at least six or seven ball destructions in that. And I do that because I feel people deserve to climax at many points along the journey of the story, not just the last page.

I have a big stack of physical BB/TT stories I keep at home in a drawer, and that I've printed out over the years. And what I like about them is that many of them ARE long, and have multiple busts/bursts and I can pick and choose which part of the story I cum to. Unlike short stories where if you want it quick, you just read the last page.

So, I ask you, my dear readers, to tell me - which do you personally prefer, long or short stories, BUT MORE IMPORTANTLY, do you like multiple cumworthy points or just one. And WHY?

thanx

n.

14 comments:

  1. The most memorable of your stories for me are "Rocky Mountain Oysters", "Pussyboy Mike", "Experiments" with Jay, "The Sock Shop", and "Sunday Balls". So my taste is toward your stories that feature a single man or very few men. I like when you have intense ballbusting throughout that builds on and on until the man's final climax and destruction. The best reason I can think of is that I like to be "riding along" with the man being tortured, to get inside his head and know his motivations and thoughts. Concentrating the entire story's pain and pleasure into a single man who has to suffer a prolonged and unreal amount of torture that grows bigger as the story progresses is much more sensual to me than other structures. In short, I prefer long stories but with only a single or very few male characters.

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    1. I would be remiss if I didn't agree that The Sock Shop is also one of my favorite stories of all time ;)

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    2. LOL. Yes well ALL know your little fetish for socks, Mr. Knave. Don't worry, it's endearing.

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  2. A great question! Myself, I LOOOOVE a nice long story with a ton of pops and BB and tease and denial etc. The longer with more opportunities to get off, the better. Maybe that's why your Jill series is also one of my all time favorites. Great characters the reader can get to know and fall in love with, and also a freakin' TON of great "money shots" as I'll call them ;)
    As always, I remain a HUGE fan of your work and sensibilities, and eagerly await your next project!
    xoxo

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  3. I agreed Knave, I love Jill series, long and many ball destruction and cum points(lol) and short one is Needle,that built up big climax and intense BB many ways. I love temple of Five and Cabin boys, because several character have different preference of BB and reader fall in love the character or the way busting. Well, anyway your stories always very nice to read and great writing. I love to read well writing ball destruction, so I love longer one the best.

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  4. I agree. Jill was an incredible series. Not sure how many times I've got back to that story. I certainly like longer stories. Plenty of build up. While I do like multiple characters, I'd rather have one character take most of the beating. Those tend have more "cum worthy points." Sometimes I can't finish a whole story because I've already blown. I can go back to a story multiple times before I finish it. - Adam

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  5. BTW, I don't ask these questions because I'm fishing for compliements, I ask them because I like to start dialogues and debates. I find debating fun. Heck I was on the debate team in High School. lol

    I suppose one question you have to ask yourself is "Do I want to hold out over a really long story to the end, or am I in the mood to have one modest build up?" I was assuming that most people have a preference, but maybe it's just about mood. Sometimes you want a quick release, other times you want a really long build up.

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  6. As a bbstory lurker since the mid 90's, my first time ever actually commenting on anything, I've got to say your stuff is the best stuff to come along since Caligula's. Short or long doesn't matter to me, it's more about the story's scenario and characters. Love Sunday balls, Wives Club but my absolute favorite is The Classroom series (especially the busting lesson). I'm dying to see more from that story's "universe". Great work man.

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    1. Wow. I'm blown away. Being compared to Caligula is like a shot of heroine.Thank you so much! Glad you enjoy my work.

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  7. as long as theyr're f/m i will enjoy all of them equally.

    Long stories are fantastic but if you break them up into parts it makes it easier to remember which part you want to get off to, you know?

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    1. See I agree with you, the long stories allow you to have multiple points which you can love or like, whereas a short story - if you don't like the ending, there's nothing you can do about it, you're stuck with it. You have more options with a long story.

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  8. My preference is definitely for the longer stories with multiple cum points, as I will edge, and stress, and strain to keep pace. That being said, my favourite story is "Cottaging Roulette", which makes it look like I'm contradicting myself, when in fact I'm trying to encourage you to continue Rob's journey. The element of suspense, mixed with danger, mixed with helpless cums, mixed with ball torture and ultimate destruction, hopefully over an extended period, would have me gushing in sympathy.

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    1. It should make you happy, then,, to know that I have future stories planned for that series worked out in my head. All I have to do is get them down on paper.

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  9. Sorry, I should have included my definite preference for M/M stories, but I guess that may have been obvious!

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